Talk:Shon the Piper/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Good888 (talk · contribs) 14:00, 20 January 2015 (UTC)

Time for another lost film article review.

Lead section

• "Lon Chaney may have appeared in this film, but it is not proven." Suggest rewrite to: "It was claimed that Lon Chaney appeared in this film, but this has been disputed."
• "The film is now considered lost." I would perfer: "The film is presumed lost"

Plot

• Link Moving Picture News.

Cast

• I would perfer a source thats claims that Lon Chaney was a Clansman in this film.

Production

• Link New York Clipper.

Release and reception

• "A pre-release review of the film said" I would perfer that you note that The Leavenworth Times reviewed this.
• "Another summary describes the film as "remarkably fresh and interesting subject" and described the film as a Scottish ballad." Likewise for The Huntington Herald.
• Link all of the places.

References

• Link the publishers of these sources if possible.

I will promote once the issues above are addressed. good888 (talk) 14:00, 20 January 2015 (UTC)

@Good888: All fixed and linked up. ChrisGualtieri (talk) 15:42, 20 January 2015 (UTC)

I have fixed one error. With that done, I am promoting to GA class. good888 (talk) 16:32, 20 January 2015 (UTC)