Talk:Shiny Pokémon/GA1

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Nominator: Pokelego999 (talk · contribs) 04:30, 26 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: DoctorWhoFan91 (talk · contribs) 08:37, 6 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

I'll take this one. Might take a few days for my initial remarks. Also, would you like to review Doctor Who series 13? DoctorWhoFan91 (talk) 08:37, 6 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

I'll review reception later in 10-12 hours. Also, I made some minor edits myself.

all fine

lowered to a 1 in 4096 chance: that's an increase, not lowering?
- Done. Magneton Considerer: Pokelego999 (Talk) (Contribs) 21:48, 7 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
The term "Shiny" was originally used by fans and later adopted as an official name.: when did these happen? give year or decade
- Not specified, and I couldn't find anything detailing it further. Magneton Considerer: Pokelego999 (Talk) (Contribs) 21:48, 7 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Designer James Turner stated: has any other designer stated anything else?
- No. From what I've researched, he's the only one to specifically say anything on this, so I did not mention other examples. Magneton Considerer: Pokelego999 (Talk) (Contribs) 21:48, 7 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

can you give how much the odds change for the examples which don't say it, if possible?
- Added for the Masuda Method. Avoided it for other methods since their odds vary a lot more depending on how many mons are knocked out, and I don't want to fill the article with a list of statistics for effects only present in one pair of games. Magneton Considerer: Pokelego999 (Talk) (Contribs) 21:48, 7 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
what's overworld?
- Added a hyperlink, which should suffice. Magneton Considerer: Pokelego999 (Talk) (Contribs) 21:48, 7 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

How do "Shining Pokemon" cards differ from normal cards?
- Added. Magneton Considerer: Pokelego999 (Talk) (Contribs) 21:48, 7 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
without a "full art" display? what does this mean?
- Tried redefining it but admittedly hard to do given it's a technical term. Magneton Considerer: Pokelego999 (Talk) (Contribs) 21:48, 7 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Radiant Pokémon were later introduced, and functioned similarly to Shining Pokémon.: again, how are these different
- Added. Magneton Considerer: Pokelego999 (Talk) (Contribs) 21:48, 7 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

There is a TheGamer ref which is not wikilinked.
- Done. Magneton Considerer: Pokelego999 (Talk) (Contribs) 21:48, 7 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Other references, and the image, is fine

@Pokelego999: will review reception later. I only saw these minor issues in the rest of the article. DoctorWhoFan91 (talk) 17:46, 7 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]