Talk:She Ain't You/GA1

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Reviewer: Jivesh boodhun (talk · contribs) 12:17, 6 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Hi. I will review this article. ★Jivesh 1205★ (talk / ♫♫Give 4 a try!!!♫♫) 12:17, 6 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Question

Has the article ever been copy-edited? ★Jivesh 1205★ (talk / ♫♫Give 4 a try!!!♫♫) 12:24, 6 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- No, is that going to be a problem? Oz ^talk 12:33, 6 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Nooooo. ★Jivesh 1205★ (talk / ♫♫Give 4 a try!!!♫♫) 12:41, 6 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Media Review

The sample should be 25 seconds long per WP:Music samples. Done
The sample can remain only if you improve the rationale. If you need help, tell me. Do not hesitate.
The image is the music video section looks fine to me.

★Jivesh 1205★ (talk / ♫♫Give 4 a try!!!♫♫) 12:22, 6 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox

|border = yes >>> should be added Done
Remove (radio) It is used only when a song is serviced to radio exclusively. For example, "Put It in a Love Song". Done
Add the year of recording
- Not sure what year it was recorded. Album notes don't mention it. Oz ^talk 12:33, 6 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Let it be. ★Jivesh 1205★ (talk / ♫♫Give 4 a try!!!♫♫) 12:42, 6 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]

★Jivesh 1205★ (talk / ♫♫Give 4 a try!!!♫♫) 12:27, 6 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

as the fourth US single from Brown's fourth >>> serving as the fourth US single.......... Done
The song received a mixed response from critics. >>> The song received mixed to positive reviews form music critics. Done

Note:You should know how to differentiate between mixed and mixed to positive.

In the United States, "She Ain't You" reached number five on the Hot R&B/Hip-Hop Songs chart, number seventeen on the Pop Songs chart, and number twenty-seven on the Billboard Hot 100. Done

>>> "She Ain't You" reached number five on the US Hot R&B/Hip-Hop Songs chart, number 17 on the Pop Songs chart, and number 27 on the US Billboard Hot 100 chart. Done

Not done. ★Jivesh 1205★ (talk / ♫♫Give 4 a try!!!♫♫) 07:29, 10 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Note: I suggest you read WP:NUMBERS.

Done Oz ^talk 12:47, 10 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]

The song also charted in the top-thirty in Australia and New Zealand. >>> The song also charted within the top-thirty on charts in Australia and New Zealand. Done

Question: Was it released in these territories. Or is this a case similar to Na, na, na, diva is a female version of a hustla / Of a hustla, of a, of a hustla / Na, na, na, diva is a female version of a hustla / Of a hustla, of a, of a hustla

No, it was exactly like "Diva". Oz ^talk 12:55, 6 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]

So you have to make a little story. Lol.... Even though the song was not released outside the US.... blablabla

Done

Not done. ★Jivesh 1205★ (talk / ♫♫Give 4 a try!!!♫♫) 07:30, 10 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Check 'Chart performance' section. Oz ^talk 07:44, 10 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]

The lead too should have that. And these is one more comment above. ★Jivesh 1205★ (talk / ♫♫Give 4 a try!!!♫♫) 07:53, 10 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Done Oz ^talk 12:47, 10 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]

An accompanying music video >>> The accompanying music video for the single Done
and sees Brown >>> and features Brown Done
The song has been performed >>> Brown performed "She Ain't You" live Done

★Jivesh 1205★ (talk / ♫♫Give 4 a try!!!♫♫) 12:40, 6 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Background and composition

I will continue at night. For now, i have to go and listen to some of this girl's music. ★Jivesh 1205★ (talk / ♫♫Give 4 a try!!!♫♫) 12:49, 6 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I will complete this on Thursday. Right now, i have exams. ★Jivesh 1205★ (talk / ♫♫Give 4 a try!!!♫♫) 07:31, 10 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]

That's fine by me. Good luck with your exams! Oz ^talk 07:44, 10 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Awwwwww thanks. ★Jivesh 1205★ (talk / ♫♫Give 4 a try!!!♫♫) 07:56, 10 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]

When Will I Continue >>> After November 16, 2011

★Jivesh 1205★ (talk / ♫♫Give 4 a try!!!♫♫) 10:59, 1 November 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Ok then. Oz ^talk 11:11, 1 November 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Critical reception

from or of?
the sample gave >>> It still gives, right?
added that its "definitely a song for the ladies ... maybe even for pop star Rihanna." >>> its?
- Done Oz ^talk 21:38, 20 November 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Chart performance

On the issue dated April 2, 2011

Expalnation: We say; For the chart issue dated April 2, 2011, otherwise use For the week ending April 2, 2011.

Make the necessary corrections elsewhere ^^^
on the Billboard Hot 100 >>> on the US Billboard Hot 100
for selling 35,000 digital copies >>> for selling more than 35,000 digital copies
On the New Zealand Singles Chart, "She Ain't You" debuted at number 37, and later peaked at number 27,[23] and spent a total of seven weeks on the chart >>> On the New Zealand Singles Chart, "She Ain't You" debuted at number 37, peaked at number 27, and spent a total of seven weeks on the chart.
- Done Oz ^talk 21:38, 20 November 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Music video

performs his iconic dance moves >>> is that a quote? Iconic? <<< Are you sure about the word iconic? If no, please put in between quotes and the as stated by bla bla bla thing.
The video opens with a dedication, saying, >>> The video opens with the following dedication,
in a '80s >>> in a 1980s
Link fedora
In between this scene >>> Does not sound goo. Rephrase or tell me, is it scenes that you wanted to write?

Again, from or of?
the same magic >>> A quote?

- Done Oz ^talk 21:38, 20 November 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Live performances

18,000 fans >>> All of them were fans? Lol.
- I changed it to an audience of 18,000 people. Does that make sense? Lol. Oz ^talk 21:38, 20 November 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Credits and personnel

No issues

Charts and certifications

No issues

Release dates

- No issues

References

Ref 26, Digital Spy should not be italicized.
Ref 27 publisher is Complex Media Network
Ref 35 Remove UK R&B Chart.
Ref 36 Remove UK Singles Chart.
- Done Oz ^talk 21:38, 20 November 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Jivesh's feelings

Very nice work. ★Jivesh 1205★ (talk / ♫♫Give 4 a try!!!♫♫) 10:31, 20 November 2011 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Congratulations. This article has passes. ★Jivesh 1205★ (talk / ♫♫Give 4 a try!!!♫♫) 04:09, 21 November 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you! :D Oz ^talk 05:10, 21 November 2011 (UTC)[reply]

You are welcome. ★Jivesh 1205★ (talk / ♫♫Give 4 a try!!!♫♫) 05:11, 21 November 2011 (UTC)[reply]