Talk:Sharif family/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Cerebellum (talk · contribs) 16:02, 4 January 2013 (UTC)

Hello! I will be reviewing this article. --Cerebellum (talk) 16:02, 4 January 2013 (UTC)

Right now this article does not meet good article criterion 3, broadness of coverage. It was interesting but I still had questions after reading it. What is IJI and why did Nawaz enter politics after joining it? What did he do as chief minister of the Punjab? As prime minister? What is the relationship between IJI and PMN-N? Can we get more details on the third generation? And was Muhammad Sharif political? Did he have other children? What about the Hudaibiyi case, what was it about and what was the result? Who are all the family members mentioned in the "Judiciary issues" section but not elsewhere in the article? What has the family been doing since their exile? Has it affected their political careers? You don't have to answer all of these questions, they are suggestions of how you can expand the article. There are no length requirements for Good Articles, but at 10.5k your article is shorter than most and I think it would benefit from additional detail, especially as there seem to be plenty of sources available. For that reason, I am placing this article on hold for seven days so you can work on expanding it. Also check the prose, I found some spelling and grammar areas and corrected them but I may have missed something. Keep working on this article though, it can definitely make GA! --Cerebellum (talk) 17:34, 4 January 2013 (UTC)

• I'll address your concerns at the weekend. Zia Khan 18:05, 8 January 2013 (UTC)

Thank you for continuing to work on the article, but unfortunately my concerns have not been addressed so I'm going to fail this article. Feel free to renominate later on. --Cerebellum (talk) 22:05, 14 January 2013 (UTC)