Talk:Sharif family

Sharif family was a Social sciences and society good articles nominee, but did not meet the good article criteria at the time. There may be suggestions below for improving the article. Once these issues have been addressed, the article can be renominated. Editors may also seek a reassessment of the decision if they believe there was a mistake.

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Date	Process	Result
January 14, 2013	Good article nominee	Not listed

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The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that the Sharif family is a Pakistani political family, largely involved in the country's politics through the Pakistan Muslim League (N)?

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Muhammad Sharif
(1920–2004)

Nawaz Sharif
1949–

Kalsoom Nawaz Sharif
1950–

Shahbaz Sharif
1950–

Begum Nusrat Shahbaz
Aaliya Honey
Tehmina Durrani
1953–

Abbas Sharif

Hassan Nawaz

Hussain Nawaz

Maryam Nawaz
1973–

Captain (R) Muhammad Safdar

Hamza Shahbaz

GA Review

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Reviewer: Cerebellum (talk · contribs) 16:02, 4 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! I will be reviewing this article. --Cerebellum (talk) 16:02, 4 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Right now this article does not meet good article criterion 3, broadness of coverage. It was interesting but I still had questions after reading it. What is IJI and why did Nawaz enter politics after joining it? What did he do as chief minister of the Punjab? As prime minister? What is the relationship between IJI and PMN-N? Can we get more details on the third generation? And was Muhammad Sharif political? Did he have other children? What about the Hudaibiyi case, what was it about and what was the result? Who are all the family members mentioned in the "Judiciary issues" section but not elsewhere in the article? What has the family been doing since their exile? Has it affected their political careers? You don't have to answer all of these questions, they are suggestions of how you can expand the article. There are no length requirements for Good Articles, but at 10.5k your article is shorter than most and I think it would benefit from additional detail, especially as there seem to be plenty of sources available. For that reason, I am placing this article on hold for seven days so you can work on expanding it. Also check the prose, I found some spelling and grammar areas and corrected them but I may have missed something. Keep working on this article though, it can definitely make GA! --Cerebellum (talk) 17:34, 4 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I'll address your concerns at the weekend. Zia Khan 18:05, 8 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for continuing to work on the article, but unfortunately my concerns have not been addressed so I'm going to fail this article. Feel free to renominate later on. --Cerebellum (talk) 22:05, 14 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]