Talk:Shah Budak/GA1
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Nominator: Aintabli (talk · contribs) 02:39, 6 March 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: Crisco 1492 (talk · contribs) 14:57, 27 September 2024 (UTC)
Prose review
[edit]- You link Turkmen to Oghuz Turks here but to Turkoman (ethnonym) at Malik Arslan. Which is correct?
- succession - would accession be a better word?
- Shah Suwar crushed his brother near Zamantu Castle - he didn't crush his brother. His forces defeated those of his brother. Per WP:SLANG, we should present this in a more encyclopedic tone.
- Zamantu Castle - Per Wikipedia:LEASTASTONISHMENT, Zamantu might be better unlinked; one would expect the article to be one on the castle.
- Shah Budak blinded Shahruh in retribution for the treatment his son Feyyaz had received in 1484. - No indication what this treatment was.
- worsting - ?
- Generally, foreign language terms that have not been adapted to English should be italicized (see MOS:NON-ENG)
Image review
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Source review
[edit]- All sources look to be reliable.
- No close paraphrasing detected through Earwig.
Conclusion
[edit]- Looks pretty good. I've made some edits; please review them. Only a few nitpicks to resolve. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 15:02, 27 September 2024 (UTC)