Talk:Sex Ed (The Office)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Khazar2 (talk · contribs) 11:56, 20 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Hey Gen Quon, I'll be happy to take this one. Comments to follow shortly. Thanks in advance for your work on it! -- Khazar2 (talk) 11:56, 20 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Could you give a bit more context about who Nate is (the character, not the actor)? You mention that he's introduced as a character, but not what position/role he has in the office.

Otherwise, this looks good on first pass; I'll move on to the checklist in a moment. -- Khazar2 (talk) 12:12, 20 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Checklist

Rate	Attribute	Review Comment
1. Well-written:
	1a. the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct.	Spotchecks and Copyvio Detector show no issues with copyright in prose.
	1b. it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation.
2. Verifiable with no original research:
	2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline.
	2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose).
	2c. it contains no original research.
3. Broad in its coverage:
	3a. it addresses the main aspects of the topic.	A bit more information about Nate would be helpful, but not necessary for passage, I think (not a main aspect).
	3b. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style).
	4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each.
	5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute.
6. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio:
	6a. media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content.
	6b. media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions.
	7. Overall assessment.	Pass as GA