Talk:Setzer Gabbiani/GA1
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Nominator: Kung Fu Man (talk · contribs) 06:45, 30 April 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: Pokelego999 (talk · contribs) 03:21, 1 July 2024 (UTC)
I will take this on in the coming days. Has one ever considered Magneton? Pokelego999 (talk) 03:21, 1 July 2024 (UTC)
Six GA Criteria
[edit]1. Article is well-written. Very minimal mistakes if any at all.
2. No OR, all info is cited in the article.
3. Coverage is broad in depth and focus. Shows multiple aspects of the character.
4. Article appears neutral, and does not appear to hold a significantly negative nor positive stance on the subject.
5. Article appears stable. Does not appear to have had any major vandalism occur.
6. Article uses one fair use image with proper rationale, and uses one music file with proper rationale.
Lead
[edit]-"However this has also earned him some criticism, seen as a "scumbag" by some reviewers, albeit one with heart that improves once he joins the rest of the game's playable cast." I'd remove the "with heart" here.
Appearances
[edit]-Looks good
Conception and design
[edit]-Looks good
Promotion and reception
[edit]-Maugein felt his hedonism in an effort to "feel alive" made him a unique character in the Final Fantasy series, someone instead of following ideals or any symbolic creed, he does what he feels is best for himself and simply watch events unfold. I'd cut everything after "series" since it mostly feels like repetition.
-"However its reuse as "Epitaph", a slower paced rendition that changed only some of the rhythm, echoing more Led Zeppelin’s "Stairway to Heaven" as the heroes defend into the tomb." Bit confused what this means, especially in regards to the following sentence.
-"praising composer Nobuo Uematsu's use of musical chords for this effect and felt for as much personality as it gave Setzer, it was a shame this variation of his theme only played once during the course of the game" I'd split the sentence on the chords and the personality into two so readers can understand it better. I'd additionally rephrase the last chunk on the personality, since it feels very opinionated.
Overall
[edit]-A very well done article. Fix the above and it should be good to go. Has one ever considered Magneton? Pokelego999 (talk) 23:45, 3 July 2024 (UTC)
- All fixed!--Kung Fu Man (talk) 00:34, 4 July 2024 (UTC)
- Looks good. Happy to pass! Has one ever considered Magneton? Pokelego999 (talk) 00:47, 4 July 2024 (UTC)