Talk:Settle Down (No Doubt song)/GA1
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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 04:58, 19 May 2016 (UTC)
The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
Hello, I'm Cartoon network freak, and here's my review to your GAN:
- Lead
- a song by -> a song recorded by
- Spike Stent, it was -> Spike Stent, the track was; you've already used "it"
- 2012 by -> 2012 through
- Remove "Latin and Caribbean-tinged beats" -> it is no genre and it doesn't fit togethr with the other content
- Lyrically, the song -> Lyrically, "Settle Down"; you've already used "song"
- about confidence and about feeling good, adjusting yourself to unfamiliar circumstances -> about confidence and feeling good, with one of its subtopics being familiar circumstances
- other songs -> other recordings; you've already used "song"
- Some critics -> Some reviewers; you've already used "critics"
- fifth album Rock Steady, -> fifth studio album, Rock Steady (2001),
- Remove "particularly"
- Santigold songs -> the works of Santigold
- July 16, 2012. In it, -> July 16, 2012, which portrays
- convoy, which -> convoy that
- to perform the song -> to perform "Settle Down"
- It received -> The clip received
- praising the -> praising its
- lights and -> lights, and
- to do -> to shoot
- Background and release
- album Rock Steady -> album, Rock Steady
- hiatus to take a break to -> hiatus, in order to
- add year of the compilation in "()"
- The main reason to go into hiatus was that, in early 2003, their lead singer Gwen Stefani started work on her 1980s-inspired new wave/dance-pop music side project, under which she has released two solo albums — Love. Angel. Music. Baby. on November 23, 2004 and The Sweet Escape on December 5, 2006 ->The main reason the band took a break from their music career was of Gwen Stefani's solo work; she had released two albums — Love. Angel. Music. Baby. (2004) and The Sweet Escape (2006).
- Remove "successful"; fancruft
- began initial work -> commenced work
- 2008, after Gwen Stefani wrapped the tour behind her second solo album, The Sweet Escape. -> 2008, following Stefani's promotional tour of her second solo record.
- This section is too excesively about the album; try to short it out
- Outcome
I've reviewed a select few sections, but as you can see, there are a substantial amount of basic errors. However, I think the first step would be to request the article be copy-edited, and then even request someone to help you improve the article (however, I'd discourage asking me as I'd quite like to re-review this when it's been worked on, and if I've worked on it, I can't review it!) Best of luck, Cartoon network freak (talk) 10:28, 22 May 2016 (UTC)