Talk:Sergei Shirokov/GA1
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Reviewer: Sp33dyphil (T • C • I love Wikipedia!) 03:13, 12 February 2011 (UTC)
- change "of the National Hockey League (NHL). He previously played for HC CSKA" to "of the National Hockey League (NHL). Shirokov previously played for HC CSKA" ... too many "he"s.
- Fixed
- The first few sentences of "Playing career" are unreferenced.
- Referenced
- First two sentences of the second paragraph under "Playing career" are unreferenced.
- Referenced
- Second paragraph of "International play" virtually unreferenced.
- newly added reference covers the three total sentences I can break it up if needs be.
- "Russia finished with the worst record." Win/loss record of the that particular tournament out of the whole competition? Worst record of Russia during their Four Nations Tournament participation history? I think the former is meant here, although a few clarifications is needed.
- Noted
- "He scored five points in six games". Reference?
- Referenced
- Replace "$67,500 (Cdn)" with "C$67,500"
- Fixed
- There's one dead link, according to [1].
- Replaced dead link with other reference currently used that contained the needed information.
- Maybe one or two portals could be added. I'm suggesting {{Portal|Ice hockey}}
- Added
I am happy with the way the article is written, although the inline citation, according to me, is not up to scratch. With the addition more references, I'm almost certainly will pass this article. Sp33dyphil (T • C • I love Wikipedia!) 03:33, 12 February 2011 (UTC)
- I took care of a couple of the quick fix issues. The nominator hasn't made any edits to WP in a few days (probably on vacation or something) but I want to give them the opportunity to make the sequestered changes. I made the above changes so the review doesn't fall through the cracks and to be on the safe side (since sport and rec articles seem to take so long to get reviews), if the nominator doesn't make the changes in what you feel is a reasonable amount of time I would be happy to take over and try to make the suggested changes, so before you consider failing this please message me (if it does actually go that far - which I don't expect.)--Mo Rock...Monstrous (leech44) 16:10, 15 February 2011 (UTC)
- I took care of all of the issues listed.--Mo Rock...Monstrous (leech44) 20:20, 19 February 2011 (UTC)
- I took care of a couple of the quick fix issues. The nominator hasn't made any edits to WP in a few days (probably on vacation or something) but I want to give them the opportunity to make the sequestered changes. I made the above changes so the review doesn't fall through the cracks and to be on the safe side (since sport and rec articles seem to take so long to get reviews), if the nominator doesn't make the changes in what you feel is a reasonable amount of time I would be happy to take over and try to make the suggested changes, so before you consider failing this please message me (if it does actually go that far - which I don't expect.)--Mo Rock...Monstrous (leech44) 16:10, 15 February 2011 (UTC)