Talk:Selfish (Dimitri Vegas & Like Mike and Era Istrefi song)/GA1

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 07:08, 9 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()

3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()

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I will get on with this article today! --K. Peake 07:08, 9 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

~~WP:OVERLINK of Dimitri Vegas & Like Mike under both songwriters and producers~~
~~The release sentence should be the third of the first para instead~~
~~"by Dimitri Vegas and Like Mike and wrote it with" → "by the duo, who served as songwriters alongside"~~
~~Remove the refrain part and release year of "Africa", as this is not notable info for the lead~~
~~"it is a dance, electro-pop" → "it is a dance-pop, electro-pop" since elsewise, it is not clear to readers that you mean the genre dance-pop~~
~~"atop the Billboard's" → "atop the US Billboard"~~
~~"number 29 in Belgium" → "while peaking at number 29 in Belgium." removing the Austria position because this is too low to be notable here~~
~~Add a brief mention of what the video features Istrefi doing~~
~~"Prior to the single's release," → "Prior to its release,"~~
~~"performed at the Tomorrowland's" → "performed at Tomorrowland's"~~

~~"and wrote it with" → "and served as songwriters alongside"~~
~~Why is [3] invoked in the single release sentence as well as the remixes one?~~
~~"by the latter labels on" → "by the aforementioned labels on" because these two are the only labels mentioned~~
~~""Selfish" is a tropical-described dance," → "Musically, "Selfish" is a tropical-described dance-pop,"~~
"Regarding the artist's collaboration," → "Regarding the collaboration with Istrefi," with the wikilink, also this should be the sentence directly after production/songwriting since it gives background on her appearance
~~""BonBon" (2015) and knew" → "'BonBon' (2015) and knew"~~
~~"as well as Istrefi's vocal delivery." → "and Istrefi's vocal delivery."~~
~~""[Selfish] is a radio friendly hit" also" → ""[Selfish is a] radio friendly hit", also"~~
~~"and similarly noted the song's potential" → "and similarly noted its potential"~~
~~"CelebMix' Jonathan Currinn commended" → "CelebMix's Jonathan Currinn commended"~~
~~Wikilink Miami Music Week~~
~~"peaked atop the Billboard's" → "peaked atop the US Billboard"~~
~~"in Belgium, and number 690" → "in Belgium and number 690"~~

~~"music video, depicting Istrefi lying on a setting" → "music video, depicting Istrefi lying in a setting" on the img text with the wikilink~~
~~"premiered "Selfish" at the Tomorrowland's" → "premiered "Selfish" at Tomorrowland's"~~
~~"An accompanying music video for "Selfish"" → "A music video for "Selfish""~~
~~"notably features a series of scenes of Istrefi performing on" → "prominently features scenes of Istrefi performing in"~~

Copyvio score looks superb at 20% bang on!!!
~~Add the language parameter to the second citation of ref 3 and alter the title appropriately~~
I don't see evidence of any editorial process or usage by reliable sources for refs 5 and 8; what exactly makes them usable?

~~Ref 18 is titled incorrectly as the music video; it appears you copied the title from the other ref by accident~~

On hold until all of the issues are fixed; that was a very quick one! --K. Peake 08:08, 9 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Hello Kyle Peake once again, I've responded to all of your comments. Iaof2017 (talk) 13:45, 10 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

✓ Pass time, I did some brief copy editing but solid job from you as always! --K. Peake 20:06, 10 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]