Talk:Seethamma Vakitlo Sirimalle Chettu/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 18:28, 26 September 2015 (UTC)

I'll finish this soon JAGUAR  18:28, 26 September 2015 (UTC)

Initial comments

• I would recommend merging the last paragraph into the fourth, per WP:LEADLENGTH
• "Produced by Dil Raju's Sri Venkateswara Creations, it features Daggubati Venkates" - would sound better as It was produced by Dil Raju's Sri Venkateswara Creations, and features Daggubati Venkates
• "the Good Samaritan teaches his sons and Geetha's father the value of spreading love in life; this is the film's centerpiece" - centrepiece
• "by his family, lives in the village of that name" - of the same name (minor)
• "At the wedding Peddodu and Geetha's father argue" - comma between "wedding" and "Peddodu"
• "Relangi Uncle is injured in an accident" - would "Uncle Relangi" be the correct order?
• "turns out to be the son of Peddodu's former boss's brother" - boss' (in this case)
• "...calls her by name instead of "Hey!" and "Oy!" They are married" - missing full stop

References

• References all check out, nice work

On hold

Another well written and comprehensive article, well done! I found no prose issues with the latter half of the article, however I did find a few minor issues with the lead (which can easily be addressed). Once all of the above are clarified this should easily pass JAGUAR  19:20, 28 September 2015 (UTC)

@Jaguar: Thanks for the review, Jaguar. Your comments have been resolved.  — Ssven2 ^{Speak 2 me} 01:13, 29 September 2015 (UTC)

Thanks for addressing them, Ssven! This now meets the GA criteria and is good to go. Well done on writing another piece of quality work JAGUAR  17:05, 29 September 2015 (UTC)