Talk:Secret Santa (song)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Aoba47 (talk · contribs) 22:42, 2 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Grabbing for a review if that is okay. Aoba47 (talk) 22:42, 2 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Lead and infobox

I am not sure if “Christmas music” qualifies as a genre; the main article about it mentions how it often includes multiple genres. I am not sure if it should be in the genre parameter of the infobox. I would remove it.
I have told in the past that the wikilink for “music critics” is not necessary.
For this sentence (Italian singer-songwriter released a cover of "Secret Santa" to his Instagram account on Christmas Eve in 2018.), you are missing the name of the artist.

Background and recording

For this part (Before the upcoming holiday season,), I do not think that “upcoming” is necessary as it is clear from the context of the rest of the sentence.
For this sentence (On December 24, 2018, Italian singer-songwriter released a cover of "Secret Santa" to his official Instagram account.), you are missing the name of the artist.

Composition

I am uncertain if the block quote is necessary for this article as Stefani is talking the album as a whole rather than this specific song. It is probably more appropriate for the article on the album instead, as a reader may assume that the quote is about the song.
Unlink “Santa Baby” here as you already have it linked in a previous section.

Reception

Everything looks good here.

Credits and personnel

Do you think a section for this would be necessary?

Final comments

Everything looks good. I only have a few minor comments, and I will pass this. Hope you are having a wonderful new year so far! Aoba47 (talk) 12:07, 3 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Aoba47 – Thank you for the review as always. Missing the name of Tiziano Ferro was quite embarrassing haha. I have addressed all of your comments. Happy NY to you too. Thanks, Carbrera (talk) 04:17, 5 January 2019 (UTC).[reply]

Thank you for addressing everything, and it happens to the best of us lol. I will ✓ Pass this. Aoba47 (talk) 04:19, 5 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]