Talk:Sebaceous carcinoma

Greeneggs&tamm (talk) 17:51, 15 November 2018 (UTC)

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment

This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 3 November 2020 and 27 November 2020. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Fredtg11.

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Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment

This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Wmedwikika.

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== 'Workplan for WikiMedicine Project Wmedwikika (talk) 00:38, 27 October 2018 (UTC) ==

I am a 4th year medical student working on this article for my WikiMedicine elective.

• My main focus will be to add information to this article and expand on the pathophysiology, morphology and treatment sections.
• I will also add a presentation/characteristics, Diagnosis criteria and epidemiology section based on the amount of information I find.
• I plan to update some of the citations, many of the references are dated from more than 5 years ago.
• I have a few review articles selected. Stay tuned for more information.

Wmedwikika (talk) 20:31, 28 October 2018 (UTC)

PEER REVIEW:

• 1) Intro reads well, but consider simplifying language in areas. For example “periocular region” could be restated as the area surrounding the eye, or skin surrounding the eye.
• 2) Consider moving last two statements of intro about treatment and prognosis their own respective sections – this might be diving into the weeds before it’s necessary
• 3) You state that it is an aggressive tumor in intro – does this mean likely to invade, fast-growing, both? May want to spell it out
• 4) Epidemiology – Nice overview. Maybe dive into details a little more here – are the population differences due to genetic factors, environmental exposures, etc? Also, you use SGc as an abbreviation of Sebacious Gland Carcinoma, but then state “SCC is more prevalent…” Is this referring to squamous cell carcinoma, or just a typo?
• 5) Clinical Presentation – first sentence is good for the intro paragraph! Lots of the rest of the first paragraph is more pathophysiology. For clinical presentation, what are their signs and symptoms? What does the tumor look like? What are typical complaints from patients?
• 6) Pathophysiology – each paragraph is good, but could use some more detail. What are the roles of UV radiation, HIV, and HPV in carcinogenesis?
• 7) Treatment – Similar to pathophysiology – it would be great to have some more detail about each treatment modality and the indications that would lead a provider to choose one over the other
• 8) Prognosis – Looks like you’re still working here, will wait to see what comes!
• 9) Overall great work! Just try to add more detail to a few sections that need it.

Greeneggs&tamm (talk) 17:51, 15 November 2018 (UTC)

Updating Sebaceous carcinoma page 11/2020

Hello, I'm planning on updating the page in the coming week(s). I've reviewed the peer editor's comments and read up on sebaceous carcinoma. Here are some of the changes I plan to make:

• Address the peer editor's comments, particularly adding to the pathogenesis
• Move epidemiology toward the beginning of the article
• Update the article based on the most recent literature
• Edit the treatment and prognosis sections.

Fredtg11 (talk) 22:08, 9 November 2020 (UTC)fredtg11

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