Talk:Se Me Olvidó Otra Vez/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 08:59, 16 December 2022 (UTC)

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

This should be over and done with soon! --K. Peake 08:59, 16 December 2022 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

• The B-side is not sourced anywhere in the body
• WP:OVERLINK of Juan Gabriel under songwriter(s)
• "from his fourth studio album," → "for his fourth studio album,"
• "It is a ranchera song that" → "The song is a ranchera number that"
• "who loved her." → "who loved a woman."
• "The track was released as" → "It was released as"
• ""Se Me Olvido Otra Vez" has been" → "The song has been"
• "has re-recorded the track twice," → "has re-recorded the song twice,"
• Add a comma after Por Los Siglos (2001)
• Wikilink live album
• "was also met with positive reactions" → "also received positive reactions"
• Pipe 2000 to 1st Annual Grammy Awards
• "at number five and four" → "at numbers five and four"

Background and composition

• Remove the comma before El Alma Joven
• Remove the comma after mariachi songs
• "composed all the track" → "composed all the tracks"

Promotion and reception

• Wikilink live album
• Pipe compilation to Compilation album

Maná version

• Infobox looks good!
• "on their second live" → "on their second live album"
• "called their performance of" → "called the performance of"
• "A writer Radio Programas del Perú" → "A writer for Radio Programas del Perú"
• "at number five and four" → "at numbers five and four"

Charts

• Should a col really be used when there are only two positions for each and the formatting creates a lot of white space on my screen?

See also

• Good

References

• Copyvio score looks fab at 9.9%!!!
• For the refs citing Google Books urls, use via Google Books with the wikilink on the first instance
• Wikilink ProQuest on ref 1
• Wikilink AllMusic on ref 4 instead of ref 6
• Wikilink La Opinión on ref 13
• Wikilink The New York Times on ref 19
• Pipe Billboard to Billboard (magazine) on ref 20

Final comments and verdict

•  On hold until all of the issues are fixed; nice work on this one! --K. Peake 09:50, 16 December 2022 (UTC)

   Done Erick (talk) 18:27, 18 December 2022 (UTC)

  Magiciandude You still need to source and mention the B-side in the body, add speech marks around it in the infobox and change met with to received positive reactions in the lead. --K. Peake 10:31, 21 December 2022 (UTC)

  @Kyle Peake  Done Thank you for catching those. Erick (talk) 15:19, 27 December 2022 (UTC)

  ✓ Pass now, thanks for picking these up in the end! --K. Peake 08:57, 30 December 2022 (UTC)