Talk:Scott Perunovich/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 19:51, 11 May 2020 (UTC)

Will be reviewing this article as part of the GAN Backlog Drive of April to May 2020. MWright96 (talk) 19:51, 11 May 2020 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Lead

• Delink American per MOS:OVERLINK  Done
• "winning bronze." - the bronze medal.  Done

Personal life

• UMBBullDogs does not state Perunovich's birth date; another source is needed for this  Done
• "Perunovich wished to attend the University of Minnesota." - any information to say why?  Done

Playing career

• "where he led the team to a 37-10-5" - think the hyphens can be replaced by en dashes  Done
• "Overall, he won 80% of his matches" - should be percent per MOS:PERCENT  Done
• "and was named the Mesabi Daily News, Hibbing Daily Tribune and Grand Rapids Herald Review Tennis Player of the Year." - the names of the newspapers are better off italized and wikilinked to their respective articles  Done
• "Perunovich joined the U.S. National Under-18 Team for two games against St. Cloud State" - a period is missing from the end of this sentence  Done
• Add a link for St. Cloud State to St. Cloud State Huskies men's ice hockey  Done

Collegiate

• Wikilink College of Liberal Arts to University of Minnesota College of Liberal Arts  Done
• Wikilink goal to Goal (ice hockey) and overtime to Overtime (ice hockey)  Done
• Wikilink Michigan Tech to Michigan Tech Huskies men's ice hockey and Maine Black Bears to Maine Black Bears men's ice hockey  Done
• "after the strong play in his rookie season Perunovich made the midterm ranks" - think the wording can be switched for readability  Done
• 2018 NHL Entry Draft should be wikilinked on the first mention, not the second  Done
• Add a link to Bowling Green State University to Bowling Green Falcons men's ice hockey  Done
• A wikilink to Assist to Assist (ice hockey)  Done
• "On July 28, 2019, Perunovich committed to another year with the Bulldogs. and proved once again to be an asset to the UMD Bulldogs." - repetition of "Bulldogs"  Done
• Wikilink National Collegiate Hockey Association  Done
• Add a link for NCHC Offensive Defenseman of the Year to List of NCHC Offensive Defenseman of the Year
  • What do you mean? HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 18:19, 12 May 2020 (UTC)
• "Perunovich subsequently became the sixth Bulldogs player to receive" - more concise; was the sixth Bulldogs player to receive  Done
• "the Hobey Baker." - Hobey Baker Award.  Done

International play

• Wikilink U.S. National Junior Team to United States men's national junior ice hockey team  Done
• "After making the cut, he helped Team USA win a bronze medal. He scored one goal and two assists during the 2018 World Junior Ice Hockey Championships." - I believe these two sentences should be merged and shortened accordingly  Done
• The sole mention of Team Canada should be wikilinked to Canada men's national junior ice hockey team  Done

Awards and honors

• The USHS award needs a reliable reference to verify it  Done

References

• The titles in references 3 and 43 should not be all in capital letters per MOS:ALLCAPS  Done
• Reference 6 title: "Meet The RoughRiders - Scott Perunovich" -the hyphen should be an en dash per MOS:DASH  Done
• Reference 15 should include the publication date  Done
• Reference 32 should have the author as Mahoney, Andrew for consistency  Done
• Reference 33 is missing the publication date  Done
• Reference 34 is missing Associated Press as the agency who provided the story to CBC  Done
• Reference 42 is missing Canadian Press as the agency who provided the article to The Globe and Mail  Done
• Reference 43 does not have the date it was published included  Done

Am going to put the review on hold to allow the nominator to respond/query the points raised above. MWright96 (talk) 16:39, 12 May 2020 (UTC)

• @HickoryOughtShirt?4: Now promoting to GA class. I have made one change to the article. MWright96 (talk) 19:18, 12 May 2020 (UTC)