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The article is well-formatted and well written, originally I was unsure whether using bullet points was the best idea, but given the content I think it makes the most sense. Given that SGO is such a specific topic, I am impressed at the number of sources you were able to find in your research - (all of which seem credible). One thing that the reader would appreciate would be a little more visual art. I believe that you grandfather owns the company. Perhaps he could send you a picture of the factory. Expansion in the section relating to food giant Agrana would be very interesting. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 141.161.133.154 (talk) 21:00, 18 November 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Well-organized and written article. The headings and topics seem relevant and have enough information for each. Nice job. I'd agree with the above that you've covered almost all of the material for this entry. What would be nice would be a few pictures -- any chance you can find some on wikicommons? Radavis147 (talk) 00:23, 24 November 2010 (UTC)[reply]