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Good articleScherzo in F-sharp minor (Shostakovich) has been listed as one of the Music good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
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July 14, 2022Good article nomineeListed

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 06:51, 10 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]


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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
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I will review this short article today; it is appropriately the GAN before mine in the queue! --K. Peake 06:51, 10 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for your review, again! Really appreciate the comments. I have addressed them all now. Let me know if there's anything else to do. Unexpectedlydian♯4talk‽ 15:01, 12 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

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  • Link anything significant in the infobox like you have elsewhere, e.g. Dmitri Shostakovich
    •  Done
  • Introduce who Dmitri Shostakovich is
    •  Done
  • Pipe Petrograd Conservatory to Saint Petersburg Conservatory
    •  Done
  • "It is one of" → "The composition is one of"
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  • "It was premiered in" → "The composition was premiered in"
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  • After the above sentence, add one about the themes of this composition, followed by a critical reception sentence; split into two paras if enough sentences
    •  Done
  • Wikilink F-sharp minor
    •  Done

Background

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  • Wikilink F-sharp minor
    •  Done
  • "during the autumn of early winter months" I don't think this actually makes sense
    • Should be "or", have changed.  Done
  • "the composers' first year at" → "the composer's first year at"
    •  Done
  • Pipe Petrograd Conservatory to Saint Petersburg Conservatory
    •  Done
  • "Shostakovich was almost fifteen." → "Shostakovich was almost 15." per MOS:NUM
    • Also changed thirteen to 13.  Done
  • Shouldn't you write "this generally remains" since the date has been disputed as you've cited here?
    •  Done
  • Wikilink B minor
    •  Done
  • "composition teacher, Maximilian Steinberg, who had taught Shostakovich" → "composition teacher Maximilian Steinberg, who had taught him"
    •  Done
  • The last para can be moved to the end of the critical assessment section, which can be also a legacy one as I will later explain
    •  Done

Form

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  • Pipe Tchaikovsky to Pyotr Ilyich Tchaikovsky
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  • See MOS:NUM for the correct formatting of the numbers of the instruments
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  • "reminiscent of Maximillian Steinberg." → "reminiscent of Steinberg."
    •  Done
  • Wikilink D major
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Critical assessment

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  • Retitle to Reception and legacy
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  • Add a comma after Nikolai Malko
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  • Mention the year of Symphony No. 1
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  • Pipe ballet to Ballet (music)
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  • Remove wikilink on Tchaikovsky
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  • Pipe Delibes to Léo Delibes
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  • Remove comma before Children's Notebook
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  • "to the composer: Gillies" → "to the composer; Gillies"
    •  Done

References

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Citations

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  • Copyvio score looks phenomenal at 5.7%!!!!
  • Ref 11 does not lead to any work, so fix it
    • Link didn't work due to a typo, have fixed now.  Done

Works cited

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Final comments and verdict

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