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GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 23:27, 27 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments later in the week. Some Dude From North Carolinawanna talk? 23:27, 27 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks! HumanxAnthro (talk) 01:49, 28 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

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Plot

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  • "Katie, Bert and Daryl" → "Katie, Bert, and Daryl"
  • "Bert, Daryl and Katie" → "Bert, Daryl, and Katie"
  • "He declares himself the "leader" out of nowhere by winning a rock, paper, scissors game." → "He declares himself the "leader" after winning a rock, paper, scissors game."

Background and development

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Production

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Workflow

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  • In the last paragraph of this section, remove the last part of the quote "and generally bugged everyone several times a week with my yammering phone calls" as it seems unnecessary, and add an [and] in-between "designed sets, painted backgrounds".

Casting

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  • This section looks good.

Animation

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Visual style

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  • This section also looks good.

Release

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Reception

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Overview

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GAN table

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GA review
(see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):
    b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):
    b (citations to reliable sources):
    c (OR):
    d (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):
    b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

Overall:
Pass/Fail:

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Notes

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