Talk:Scarlet-and-white tanager/GA1
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 09:36, 30 September 2021 (UTC)
Comments
- What's a "median stripe"?
- I've adee.
- "It feed mainly" feeds.
- Fixed.
- It is... repeated several times in the lead. Perhaps switch one or two out for the name of the species for variety.
- Done.
- "P.L. Sclater" -> "P. L. Sclater"
- Done.
- "in Remedios, Antioquia" which country?
- Added.
- "Union (IOC). Alternative" you never use IOC so not sure of the purpose of abbreviating it.
- Removed.
- "scarlet and white tanager" and "scarlet-white tanager" alt names are normally given in bold and plausible redirects can be created from them to this article if they don't already exist.
- Bolded and created redirects.
- Link body parts again in the prose.
- Done.
- "non-migratory" link appropriately.
- Linked.
- Can we say what IUCN means?
- Not sure what you mean.
- Red list was mentioned in the lead but not in the main article, don't have details in the lead which aren't in the main article.
- Added to body.
- Ref 6 has a spaced hyphen, needs to be en-dash.
- Fixed. AryKun (talk) 04:12, 2 October 2021 (UTC)
That's it for me. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 18:38, 1 October 2021 (UTC)