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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 19:52, 23 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]


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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

From "No Lie" to this; get ready for another review! --K. Peake 19:52, 23 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

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  • WP:OVERLINK of Martin Garrix under producer(s)
  • "on 27 January 2017 through" → "on 27 January 2017 by"
  • "after Garrix premiered it" → "after being premiered by Garrix"
  • "of Lipa's eponymous debut album" → "of Lipa's eponymous debut studio album,"
  • ""Scared to Be Lonely" was met with acclaim" → ""Scared to Be Lonely" received acclaim"
  • "the top 10 of 17 charts worldwide," → "the top 10 of charts in 17 countries worldwide,"
  • "Garrix's native of" → "Garrix's native region of"
  • "where it reached the third position." → "reaching the third position."
  • "number 14 and 76 respectively on" → "number 14 and 76, respectively, on"
  • "The song is certified platinum" → "The song has since been certified platinum"
  • "including the UK and US where it received platinum certifications from the British Phonographic Industry (BPI) and Recording Industry Association of America (RIAA)," → "including the United Kingdom and United States, where it was certified platinum by the British Phonographic Industry (BPI) and Recording Industry Association of America (RIAA), respectively,"
  • "a triple platinum from the" → "being certified triple platinum by the"
  • Identify NVPI by its full name and put the abbreviation in brackets
  • "sings in the middle of a forest." → "sings in a forest."
  • "promoted the track with live performances at Capital FM's Jingle Bell Ball," → "promoted the song in 2017 with live performances at Capital FM's the Jingle Bell Ball,""
  • Target acoustic to Acoustic music

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Background and recording

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  • "of his club extended play" → "of a club record in his third extended play"
  • "meeting with his label with seven new songs" → "meeting with his record label that featured seven new songs" with the wikilink, plus name the label
  • Shouldn't the production information be directly after the writing part?
  • "of a vocalist. Several artists recorded" → "of a vocalist, with several artists recording"
  • "of collaborators. He reached out to Lipa's management hoping" → "of collaborators, with him reaching out to Lipa's management in hope"
  • "expressed he admiration of it" → "expressed her admiration of the song"
  • "were introduced by" → "had been introduced by"
  • Remove target on production
  • "duties were taken on by Garrix," → "was done by Garrix,"
  • "while Frank van Essen did the" → "while Frank van Essen contributed the"
  • Remove wikilink on Netherlands

 Done

Music and lyrics

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  • "of the song, that uses halt-time" → "of the song, which uses half-time" on the audio sample text
  • ""Scared to Be Lonely" is primarily a" → "Musically, "Scared to Be Lonely" is a"
  • "that incorporates elements of" → "with elements of"
  • "electro,[10] emo-EDM music." → "electro,[10] and emo-EDM."
  • "for three minutes and 40 seconds," → "for 3:40,"
  • "is composed in 4
    4     time     and the key of" → "is set in the time signature of 4
    4     time]] and is composed in the key of"
  • "138 beats per minute, and a" → "138 beats per minute and a"
  • Remove wikilink on piano
  • "items are added." → "items come in."
  • Wikilink upbeat per MOS:LINK2SECT
  • "future bass and" → "future bass, and"

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Release

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  • "similar to the cover art for" → "similarly to the cover art for"
  • "The formally announced" → "The former announced"
  • "of the song and" → "of the song as well as one of its"
  • "It was officially released for" → "It was released for" since the labels make it clear this was an official release
  • "on 27 January 2017 through" → "on 27 January 2017, through"
  • Not sure if it should be named as Garrix's label since you should introduce it as that in the opening section instead; keep the name either way though
  • "It was later included as" → ""Scared to Be Lonely" was later included as"
  • "released on 19 October 2018 through" → "released on 19 October 2018 by"

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Critical reception

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  • Retitle to Reception because there is an award that does not have its own sub-section and should not either due to it only being mentioned for one sentence
  • "was met with critical acclaim." → "was met with acclaim from music critics."
  • "while labelling it a" → "while labelling the song a"
  • "thought the song was reminiscent of The Chainsmokers" → "thought the song is reminiscent of the Chainsmokers" per MOS:THEMUSIC
  • "its potential to be a bonus track on Lipa's debut album as it" → "the song's potential to be a bonus track on Dua Lipa, as it" with the wikilink per MOS:LINK2SECT
  • Target ballad to Sentimental ballad
  • "praising the space give for" → "praising the space given for"
  • "third best song behind" → "third best song, behind"
  • "They saw the strength" → "The two of them saw the strength"
  • "in its subtlety and" → "in the song's subtlety and"
  • "and commended its" → "and commended the"

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Commercial performance

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  • "at number five on the" → "at number five on the Netherlands'"
  • "it rose to a peak of number three on the chart," → "it rose to a peak of number three,"
  • "with a debut of number 29 and a peak of" → "debuting at number 29 and attaining a peak position of"
  • "It reached the summit" → "The song reached the summit"
  • "on the chart dated" → "on the issue dated"
  • "a peak of 14, where it spent two weeks." → "a peak of number 14 on the chart, spending two weeks at the position."
  • "In both weeks at its peak," → "In both weeks that the song was at its peak,"
  • "in the top 15 of the chart" → "in the top 15 of the UK Singles Chart"
  • "It spent a total of" → ""Scared to be Lonely" spent a total of"
  • The word Chart should have correct capitalisation for the dance chart's name
  • "debuted 88 on the" → "debuted at number 88 on the"
  • "charted dated" → "chart issue dated"
  • "selling 1,000,000 track-equivalent units in the United States." → "selling 1,000,000 track-equivalent units in the US."
  • "reached the top 10 of charts in" → "further reached the top 10 of charts in"
  • "also holds a diamond certification in" → "has been certified diamond in"
  • "in Norway and Sweden," → "in Norway and Sweden, respectively,"
  • "double platinum in Australia,[69] Canada,[70] and Italy." → "double platinum in Australia,[69] Canada,[70] and Italy, respectively."

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Music videos

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  • Img needs a full-stop to end the text
  • "and was released alongside" → "and released alongside"
  • Remove target on Scandinavian
  • "They sourced several" → "The company sourced several"
  • Wikilink Alexa
  • "behind it are the moments" → "behind it comes from the moments"
  • "wandering around the landscape reminiscing" → "wandering around the landscape while reminiscing"
  • Wikilink aspect ratios
  • "with partners in a" → "accompanied by partners in a"

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Credits and personnel

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  • Good

Live performances

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 Done

Remixes

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  • "Two remix extended plays were" → "Two remix EPs were"
  • "that just contain powerful atmosphere and" → "that contain just a powerful atmosphere and"
  • Wikilink funky
  • "DubVision creates a" → "DubVision created a"
  • Shouldn't the word "catchy" be in speech marks?
  • "was noted for" → "remix was noted for"
  • Wikilink 8-bit sounds
  • "Joe Mason recorded" → "Joe Mason featured"
  • Target re-pitched to Pitch (music)
  • Acoustic version should have its own para
  • "Lipa's wanted to" → "Lipa had wanted to"

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Track listings

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  • Good

Credits and personnel

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  • Remove wikilink on Netherlands

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Charts

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Weekly charts

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  • Good

Year-end charts

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  • UK Singles (Official Charts Company) → UK Singles (OCC)

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Certifications

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  • Portugal certification is not backed up

Release history

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  • Label → Label(s)

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See also

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  • Good

References

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  • Copyvio score looks amazing at 9.9!
  • Make sure all of these are archived by using the tool
  • Cite Your EDM as publisher instead for refs 25 and 74
  • Target Mahasz to Association of Hungarian Record Companies on ref 121
  • Wikilink Recorded Music NZ on ref 127
  • WP:OVERLINK of Associação Fonográfica Portuguesa on ref 133
  • Add a URL in backup for ref 139 since the info is not displayed by the citation directly from the table

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  • Are you sure the acoustic music video shouldn't be in the infobox; you could do this by extending the misc template?
  • From what I've been told, only the information of the original or official singles (if more than one official single version of a song was released) should be included in the infobox. This can be seen for GA "Don't Start Now" where the Live in LA remix music video in not included in the infobox. Personally, I do not think it should be included but I guess it could be discussed. LOVI33 21:44, 25 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Final comments and verdict

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