Talk:Saskatchewan Highway 5/GA1

GA Review

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Done What is the purpose of two maps in the infobox?
Are there shields for the roads Highway 5 intersects? will try to modify template at User:Pomte/Template:SK road shield for this...
Done In first paragraph of lead, add comma after "Yellowhead"
Done Make the third parapgraph of the lead an italicized note at the top of the page
Done In first sentence of history, capitalize "river"
Done In first sentence in second paragraph of history, add comma after "Route"
Done In next sentence, change "an" to "a"
"a dirt to gravel to all weather road" sounds awkward, try rephrasing
Done The sentence "In 1925, access from Saskatoon to Provincial Highway 5 was via Provincial Highway 12 due north of Saskatoon connecting with Highway 5 west of Warman or via Provincial Highway 27 which traveled east and north from Saskatoon connecting at Aberdeen" sounds unclear.
Done "north south" should be hyphenated
"became retitled? sounds awkward
Done Try to combine some of the short sentences in the Communities section
Done "down town" should be one word
Done "at the Saskatoon Transit"? sounds awkward
Done In the sentence "The Highway 5 - Highway 35 junction features historical plaque which commemorates the Touchwood Hills Hudson Bay Company fur trade post established in 1879." add "a" between features and historical
Done Fix spelling of "Hw 755"
What kind of museums are in Sturgis and Preeceville?
Done "is hosted at Verigin" sounds awkward, Try rephrasing
In first sentence of Geophysical features section, add comma after "Saskatchewan"
Done Make sure to use present tense when describing the current aspects of the route, do not use "travel will be through"
Clarify what an ecoregion is, possibly by adding a wikilink
Done "re-opened" should not be hyphenated
In second paragraph of Geophysical features section, what are Watson and Wadena?
Done Hyphenate "three lake"
Replace opening brace with parentheses
Done In Highway economy section, replace "agricultural" with "agriculture"
Done In first sentence of second paragraph of Highway configuration section, add comma after "Kamsack"
Done In next paragraoh, "directions" should be singular
Done In Upgrades section, remove comma after 2008
Done Can you make the second paragraph of the Upgrades section more clear by rewording?
Done In first section of third paragraph of upgrades section, change "a" to "an"
Done Fix redlink to correspond to wikilink to Ministry of Highways and Infrastructure (Saskatchewan)
Done "re-surface" should not be hyphenated
Combine a lot of the short paragraphs in the Travel route section
Done "Zig-zagging" sounds awkward; try using a different word
Do you think you can make the sentences more varied in the Travel route section?
Done Add an intersections table to the article
I would suggest making the format of the article in line with the standards at Wikipedia:WikiProject Canada Roads by moving some of the sections around

I am placing the article on hold Dough4872 (talk) 03:21, 6 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for taking time to review the article. I have adressed the basic ones first, and will return to the more in-depth ones tomorrow when it is earlier in the day. Kind Regards SriMesh | talk 05:18, 6 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]