Talk:Saruq Al Hadid/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Jens Lallensack (talk · contribs) 10:44, 16 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Sorry for letting you wait for so long! However, I think that this article does not yet meet Good Article criteria. Specifically:

Criterium 1 (well written) is not fully fulfilled because
- the lead section is not an adequate summary (does not even mention the age of the site);
- contains inappropriate content (e.g., "Entrance costs 20 AED for adults and 10 AED for children. The museum is open Saturday & Thursday: 08:00am – 02:00pm and Sunday to Wednesday: 08:00am – 08:00pm." – please remove this).
Criterium 2 (varifiable) is not fulfilled as many sentences lack inline citations.
Criterium 3 (Broad in its coverage) is not fulfilled as most highly relevant academic works that show up when doing a Google Scholar search are not included. Although the article has 14 references, most of these are dublicates (and should be listed only once).
Criterium 4 and 5: probably all right.

This still requires a lot of work. However, if you would like to work on fixing these issues soon, please let me know: I would be glad to do a second review after you are done. If I don't hear from you I have to archive/fail this soon (but even in this case, I encourage you to submit it to GAN again when ready, and I may pick it up once again for review). --Jens Lallensack (talk) 10:44, 16 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Closing comment: This candidate is quick-failed given the problems outlined above, and lack of author response. I can offer to pick it up again for review when above points were addressed and the article was renominated. --Jens Lallensack (talk) 18:58, 30 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]