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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 21:34, 18 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 21:34, 18 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

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  • Infobox looks good.
  • Birthdate needs a source.
  • Here and in other sections, add a comma after "Sheets".
  • Here and in other sections, change "lip syncing" and "lip synced" to "lip-syncing" and "lip-synced".

Early life and education

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  • In the first reference, the Wayback Machine template isn't necessary or ideal to use since other references don't have it. May I suggest using "<ref>{{cite web|url=|title=|date=|first=|last=|website=|archive-url=|archive-date=|url-status=live|access-date=}}</ref>" this instead?
  • Add a comma after "College Park".

Career

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  • Remove the comma after "comedy in Atlanta".
  • "of self-help book" → "of a self-help book"
  • Remove the commas after "performing on TikTok" and "economical political satire".
  • The Princess Bride should link to The Princess Bride (film).

Publications

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  • This section looks good.

Filmography

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  • This section looks good.

Awards and nominations

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  • This section looks good.

References

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  • PEOPLE.comPeople
  • streamys.orgStreamy Awards
  • Mark references from The New Yorker with "|url-access=registration".
  • Mark references from Adweek with "|url-access=subscription".
  • Mark references from Financial Times with "|url-access=subscription".
  • Mark references from Los Angeles Times with "|url-access=limited".
  • Mark references from The New York Times with "|url-access=limited".
  • Mark references from Rolling Stone with "|url-access=limited".
  • Mark references from Time with "|url-access=limited".
  • Mark references from The Atlantic with "|url-access=limited".
  • Mark references from Vogue with "|url-access=limited".
  • Mark references from Vanity Fair with "|url-access=limited".
  • The two references after "the 2020 Democratic National Convention" are missing websites.
  • The reference after the "Associated Press" should link to the source.
@BennyOnTheLoose: Everything else looks good but her specific birthdate still needs a source. c (talk) 15:14, 19 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for your constructive review, Some Dude From North Carolina. I've reached out to the co-nominator about the date of birth, as they may be able to resolve this more quickly than I can. Regards, BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 15:23, 19 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Some Dude From North Carolina - In the absence of a reliable source for Cooper's full date of birth being available, the article now just states her year of birth. Regards, BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 22:59, 20 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Progress

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GA review
(see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):
    b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):
    b (citations to reliable sources):
    c (OR):
    d (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):
    b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

Overall:
Pass/Fail:

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