Talk:Sarah Cooper/GA1
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 21:34, 18 March 2021 (UTC)
Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 21:34, 18 March 2021 (UTC)
Infobox and lead
[edit]- Infobox looks good.
- Birthdate needs a source.
- Here and in other sections, add a comma after "Sheets".
- Here and in other sections, change "lip syncing" and "lip synced" to "lip-syncing" and "lip-synced".
Early life and education
[edit]- In the first reference, the Wayback Machine template isn't necessary or ideal to use since other references don't have it. May I suggest using "<ref>{{cite web|url=|title=|date=|first=|last=|website=|archive-url=|archive-date=|url-status=live|access-date=}}</ref>" this instead?
- Add a comma after "College Park".
Career
[edit]- Remove the comma after "comedy in Atlanta".
- "of self-help book" → "of a self-help book"
- Remove the commas after "performing on TikTok" and "economical political satire".
- The Princess Bride should link to The Princess Bride (film).
- All done. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 14:51, 19 March 2021 (UTC)
Publications
[edit]- This section looks good.
Filmography
[edit]- This section looks good.
Awards and nominations
[edit]- This section looks good.
References
[edit]- PEOPLE.com → People
- streamys.org → Streamy Awards
- Mark references from The New Yorker with "|url-access=registration".
- Mark references from Adweek with "|url-access=subscription".
- Mark references from Financial Times with "|url-access=subscription".
- Mark references from Los Angeles Times with "|url-access=limited".
- Mark references from The New York Times with "|url-access=limited".
- Mark references from Rolling Stone with "|url-access=limited".
- Mark references from Time with "|url-access=limited".
- Mark references from The Atlantic with "|url-access=limited".
- Mark references from Vogue with "|url-access=limited".
- Mark references from Vanity Fair with "|url-access=limited".
- The two references after "the 2020 Democratic National Convention" are missing websites.
- The reference after the "Associated Press" should link to the source.
- Hopefully now all done, but let me know about any outstanding issues with these. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 14:52, 19 March 2021 (UTC)
- @BennyOnTheLoose: Everything else looks good but her specific birthdate still needs a source. c (talk) 15:14, 19 March 2021 (UTC)
- Thanks for your constructive review, Some Dude From North Carolina. I've reached out to the co-nominator about the date of birth, as they may be able to resolve this more quickly than I can. Regards, BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 15:23, 19 March 2021 (UTC)
- Some Dude From North Carolina - In the absence of a reliable source for Cooper's full date of birth being available, the article now just states her year of birth. Regards, BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 22:59, 20 March 2021 (UTC)
- Thanks for your constructive review, Some Dude From North Carolina. I've reached out to the co-nominator about the date of birth, as they may be able to resolve this more quickly than I can. Regards, BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 15:23, 19 March 2021 (UTC)
- @BennyOnTheLoose: Everything else looks good but her specific birthdate still needs a source. c (talk) 15:14, 19 March 2021 (UTC)
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