Talk:Sansón (wrestler)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 20:17, 5 October 2020 (UTC)

Reviewing for the GAN October 2020 Backlog Drive. MWright96 (talk) 20:17, 5 October 2020 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Lead

• "At one point Sansón held three different CMLL championships as he held the Occidente Trios Championship and the Mexican National Trios Championship with the other members of Nueva Generación Diniamitas and the CMLL Arena Coliseo Tag Team Championship with his brother." - because he had won

Personal life

• "are kept a secret from the wrestling fans." - concealed from the wrestling fanbase.
• ", including Forastero, Universo 2000 Jr. and Máscara Año 2000 Jr." - Forastero and Universo 2000 Jr. are not mentioned in the source attacted to it. Another source is needed to verify this additional information
• "Carmelo noticed how serious they took it" - took up their hobby
• "His younger brother, known under the ring name El Cuatrero was born two years later in 1996." - a comma is missing after "Cuatrero" and before "was"
• "while it is unclear if Hijo de Máscara Año 2000 is a blood relative or only fictional relatives." - or a fictional relative.
• "were very young and the time and he was not sure they would ever become professional wrestlers." - at the time and unsure they would become professional wrestlers.

Professional wrestling career

• "the duo won their first Lucha de Apuestas, or bet match, where they defeated Los Centellas (I and II) and unmasked the duo." - repetition of "duo"

Consejo Mundial de Lucha Libre (2014–current)

• "The brothers teamed up with Jocker for trios tournament,2 - for the trios
• "On November 11, 2015 Cuatrero and Sansón teamed up with their cousin Forastero and won the Occidente Trios Championship." - to win
• "but was defeated b Furia Roja, Mr. Trueno and Ray Trueno." - were defeated by
• "After working in Mexico City for over a year," - for more than a year,
• "as they both made it to the finals" - progressed to
• " Sansón was paired with El Terrible for the tournament, but the duo lost to Pegasso and Máscara Dorada in the first round of the tournament." - repetition of "tournament"
• "Soberano Jr. and Carístico defeated Sansón and '''This is a good article. Follow the link for more information.''' Último Guerrero to win the tournament." - the text in bold is certainly unneeded
• "eliminating him from the tournament before being eliminated himself.[24][24]" - duplicate citations should not exist
• "Nueva Generación Dinamita announced that they were giving up the CMLL Arena Coliseo Tag Team Championship," - relinquishing
• "("National Incredible Teams Tournament)" - the closing quotation marks are missing here
• "2019 was the first year that the three members of Nueva Generación Dinamita participated in the annual Fantastica Mania tour of Japan," - don't start a paragraph with a digit
• "2019 also marked the first year that El Cuatrero participated in the Universal Championship," - same issue as above
• "Sansón lost to Volador Jr. in the opening round. [32][33]" - no space between the period and the citations please
• "The 2020 Sin Piedad show offered Sansón the opportunity to become a triplechampion" - three-time champion
• "The 2020 Sin Piedad show offered Sansón the opportunity to become a triplechampion as he and Cuatrero challenged Místico and Carístico for the CMLL World Tag Team Championship but lost the match.[37]" - this sentence does not mention Sanson or Cuatero, so an alternative reliable source is needed to verify all of this sentence

Independent circuit (2014–current)

• "While working for CMLL, Sansón, like all CMLL workers, is allowed to take independent circuit bookings on days he is not needed by CMLL not arranged through CMLL." - too many mentions of "CMLL" in the same sentence
• "Sansón and El Cuatrero uccessfully challenged" - unsuccessfully
• "In June Sansón was forced to team up with Trauma I to face Cuatrero and Trauma I" - II
• Wikilink International Wrestling Revolution Group
• "who both use ring characters inspired by the original Los Dinamitas" - a period is missing to end this sentence

References

• Reference 7 is dead and requires archiving
• References 16 and 17 will need archiving because both sources are dead
• Reference 32 is dead and will need to be archived
• Reference 40 is dead and has to be archived
• Reference 50 is missing the date it was accessed
• The publisher for Reference 50 should be written as CageMatch and put in the work field

Will put the review on hold to allow the nominator to address or query the points raised above. MWright96 (talk) 11:35, 6 October 2020 (UTC)

• MWright96 I believe I have addressed all concerns. MPJ-DK (talk) 22:31, 11 October 2020 (UTC)
  • @MPJ-DK: Now promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 16:15, 12 October 2020 (UTC)