Talk:Sandaime J Soul Brothers/GA1
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Reviewer: Aircorn (talk · contribs) 04:26, 3 May 2020 (UTC)
- Nothing done about sourcing so failing. AIRcorn (talk) 07:35, 11 June 2020 (UTC)
- I see a merge has just been done. Is it completed or are there likely to be further work in this regard. AIRcorn (talk) 04:27, 3 May 2020 (UTC)
- I also see on the talk that there is talk of splitting out the discography section. I would support such a move as the entire bottom half consists of tables with little prose. AIRcorn (talk) 04:31, 3 May 2020 (UTC)
Review
[edit]- Is there a reason we don't use Hiros full name. It starts off quiet informally.
- The origins doesn't really introduce the group. It says "they released ...", but apart from Hiro we don't know who they are, where the other members came from or their role in the group. The second generation section gives a much better intro to the band.
- I am seeing a critical lack of sources in the history section. That needs to be remedied before I can continue the review. AIRcorn (talk) 04:40, 3 May 2020 (UTC)