Talk:San Felipe del Progreso

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Article could stand substantial copyediting. Words like "beautiful" aren't really encyclopedic and should probably be removed. John Carter (talk) 17:54, 3 February 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I think this is about the municipality but I will check with the student. Thelmadatter (talk) 23:53, 4 February 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I've copyedited the article. However there are some confusing statements:

if the minimum temperarture is 2 degrees celsius then how can there be frosts in february and march?
if the exceptions to the rule about catolicism being the predominant religion are San Agustin Mextepec and Mayorazgo then which religion do they have there?
The phrase about forest wealth and excessive logging is not intelligible.
The section about important people should also describe why they are important. And probably that section should be scrapped altogether - unless some of those people are important enough to have their own article on wikipedia.·Maunus· ·ƛ· 15:33, 20 February 2008 (UTC)[reply]