Talk:Samurai Jack/GA1
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 21:16, 10 March 2021 (UTC)
Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 21:16, 10 March 2021 (UTC)
Infobox and lead
[edit]- Non-free rationale for the title card looks good.
- Every genre should be sourced.
- Running time also needs a source.
- Was the series originally created for Adult Swim?
- "shapshifting" → "shapeshifting"
- "about deal the" → "about to deal the"
- Are there several "ways" Jack can return or can it be changed to "way"?
- Remove the comma after "critical acclaim".
Premise
[edit]- Add commas after "the land" and "jungles".
Episodes
[edit]- This section looks good.
Production
[edit]- Add commas after "Lawrence of Arabia" and "total, Tartakovsky".
- The reference after "bushido code" moved to 46:44 when clicked. The timestamp is already enough so make it link to the start of the video.
Conclusion and revival
[edit]- Change all uses of "live action" to "live-action"
- Add a comma after "and eventually".
- The last two sentences in this section need sources.
Reception
[edit]Critical reception
[edit]- Is the quote block necessary? Vulture doesn't seem like that much of a source for a quote block.
- Can this section be expanded a little bit (2-5 more reviews)?
Awards and nominations
[edit]- Instead of skipping a line and making the text small, add in normal size "(for "[Episode]")" to the nominees (example 1 and example 2).
- What is the purpose of the sentence at the bottom of this section? Can it be moved or removed?
Other media
[edit]- "released October 23" → "released on October 23"
- Add commas after "Nintendo Switch" and "Jack, the Scotsman".
References
[edit]- Archive all sources (either manually or this tool).
- For Rotten Tomatoes, might I recommend this template?
Progress
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Notes
[edit]- @Paper Luigi: It has been around a week since I put this article on hold. If my suggestions are not addressed, I'm sadly going to have to fail this article due to your absence. I'm giving you until 00:00, 20 March 2021 (UTC) to respond or I'm going to have to fail it per WP:GAN/I#R3. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 00:26, 19 March 2021 (UTC)