Talk:Samuel Marolois

A fact from Samuel Marolois appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 4 April 2022 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:

Did you know... that Samuel Marolois wrote books about theory and practice of both perspective and fortification?

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The result was: promoted by SL93 (talk) 05:01, 26 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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... that Samuel Marolois wrote books about perspective and about fortifications? Source: fortification [1] Perspective: [2]
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Interstate 40 in Tennessee
- Comment: Happy to hear better hook suggestions.

Created by Kusma (talk). Self-nominated at 00:07, 11 March 2022 (UTC).[reply]

This nomination has a handful of minor issues. QPQ complete, content of article, length, and newness all good. Issues arise with the hook itself. Grammatically, it is unclear what type of perspective is being discussed, and that should be linked both in the article and in the hook. Additionally, I would recommend altering the hook to read something like "wrote books on the topics of perspective and fortifications?" As it is, the hook is a little bit of a jumble. Great article, good job on sourcing. ~ Pbritti (talk) 05:16, 24 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you for the review and your suggestions! I have linked Perspective (graphical) in the article.
ALT1 ... that Samuel Marolois wrote books about theory and practice of both perspective and fortification?
ALT2 ... that the mathematician Samuel Marolois applied geometry to perspective and to fortifications?
ALT3 ... that Samuel Marolois wrote books on the topics of perspective and fortification?
@Pbritti: I have added a few slight variations on the hook; do you think any of them is suitable? —Kusma (talk) 09:39, 24 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]
All of these hooks are fantastic. I especially like the first and recommend that one for the front page! ~ Pbritti (talk) 15:58, 24 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]