Talk:Samuel C. Phillips/GA1
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Reviewer: Zawed (talk · contribs) 03:17, 9 October 2021 (UTC)
I'll take a gander shortly. Zawed (talk) 03:17, 9 October 2021 (UTC)
This is looking pretty good.
- Can anything verifiable be added regarding his service in WWII? There is an image of him in a P-51.
- Um, yes. This might take a few days though. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 08:40, 12 October 2021 (UTC)
- I've expanded it as best I could. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 20:50, 12 October 2021 (UTC)
- Um, yes. This might take a few days though. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 08:40, 12 October 2021 (UTC)
- Phillips agreed that it was necessary. agreed with who? Or perhaps this should be "believed that it was necessary".
- Changed as suggested. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 08:40, 12 October 2021 (UTC)
- Phillips privately wrote to Mueller commanding that the president; commanding or requesting? Was Phillips higher up the chain relative to Meuller?
- Wrong word: should have been "recommending". Hawkeye7 (discuss) 08:40, 12 October 2021 (UTC)
- Some dupe links; Apollo Program and Air Force Systems Command, both in the lead; World War II, Saturn V, General
- Image tags all check out.
That's it for me. Zawed (talk) 07:55, 12 October 2021 (UTC)
- All points addressed. Hawkeye7 (discuss)
- That looks all good to me. Passing as GA as I believe that this article meets the relevant criteria. Zawed (talk) 08:48, 14 October 2021 (UTC)