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GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Samuel Blais/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 06:34, 23 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]


Reviewing later. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 06:34, 23 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

  • Page number for ref 6 would be great. Done
  • Frédéric Lavoie is the general manager for the Estacades, right? Done
  • "Commandeurs" or "Commanders"?
  • "the Trois-Rivieres" Doesn't make sense to have "the" here, unless you want to change it to "the Estacades" instead. Done
  • "5'9" {{convert}}
  • His draft overall number should also be mentioned in the prose. Done
  • Be consistent with using "Blues's" or "Blues'". Done
  • "lost six games" Lost in six games. Done
  • "the teams Offensive" Missing apostrophe. Done
  • Craig Berube should be linked for context. Done
  • "He recorded his first career professional goal in his AHL debut" The reference says he only recorded two shots on goal in that game. Done
  • Ref 31 has an agency (AP). Done
  • "reasigned" Done
  • Lead can be expanded with his AHL career. Done

That should be it. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 07:17, 25 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Nova Crystallis, I hope I have made the appropriate changes. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 10:10, 25 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]