Talk:Sako Chivitchian/GA2

GA Review

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Reviewer: Jezhotwells (talk) 17:35, 3 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I shall be reviewing this article against the Good Article criteria, following its nomination for Good Article status.

Disambiguations: none found. Jezhotwells (talk) 17:39, 3 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Linkrot: none found. Jezhotwells (talk) 17:39, 3 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for criteria)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
The lead contains material which is not mentioned in the body of the article, e.g. birth in Armenia and immigration to the US. See WP:LEAD.

Stray sentences need consolidating into paragraphs.
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
Referenced ok, references appear reliable enough.
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
He immigrated to the United States of America When?
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
No images used.
Overall:
Pass/Fail:
On Hold for seven days for above issues to be addressed. Jezhotwells (talk) 18:14, 3 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

THe only edit made to this article since the review has been the addition of an EL, so as no attempt has been made to address the points above, I am failing this nomination. Jezhotwells (talk)