Talk:Saint Kitts and Nevis Olympic Committee/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 03:35, 25 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

1. Prose ✓ Pass

2. Verifiability ✓ Pass

3. Depth of Coverage ✓ Pass

4. Neutral ✓ Pass

5. Stable ✓ Pass

6. Illustrations ✓ Pass

7. Miscellaneous ✓ Pass

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"The committee has oversaw six Olympic and five Commonwealth Games winning one gold medal" - I think there should be a comma between Games and winning
- Done
"The NOC was officially located at the Charles Wilkin Building from 1994 to 2005, when it moved to the Olympic House in Basseterre, Saint Kitts." - It's probably best to mention the city at the first building, instead of the second. I had to read over this a couple times before realizing that the indication was both were in Basseterre
- Done
"The delegate featred one athlete in both" - Spelling error in featured. Additionally, I'm wondering if it should be delegation instead of delegate
- Fixed Delegation makes more sense to me, so I changed it.
Maybe link the 100-metre sprints to 100 metres at the Olympics?
- Not done, it was in the Commonwealth Games. Username⁶⁸⁹² 22:56, 25 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  - Was referring to this passage "The delegate featred one athlete in both the men's and women's 100-meter sprints". It's in the Olympics section.

Is there a specific reason the '96, '00, and '16 Olympics are linked, but the '04, '08, and '12 aren't?
- I've Added the links
"The nation has won just one medal at the games, a gold for Kim Collins in the 100 meters.[25] The country has participated in athletics, cycling and table tennis." - Which year was it won in? Probably worth mentioning.
- Added It was in the lead

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The Continental Association isn't cited anywhere
- There appears to be no option for citing sources on the infobox template for continental associations. I've started a discussion at the WikiProject. Username⁶⁸⁹² 02:34, 26 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  - I've cited straight to the prose. Probably the best solution. Could potentially be worded differently Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 13:32, 27 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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Image licensing looks good. A spot check of the references showed no issues. Placing this one on hold. Hog Farm (talk) 22:22, 25 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]