Talk:Safe (Fringe)/GA1
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Reviewer: ChessFiends (talk · contribs) 19:44, 3 May 2013 (UTC)
Very few problems, definitely GA quality TV episode article, I'll point out a few nitpicky tweaks to be made.
- It begins when "a group use" when a group uses
- "He obtained this technology two episodes ago, in "The Equation"." Plot summaries are supposed to be in-universe descriptions, so either remove this sentence, hatnote it or say something like he obtained this tech earlier with how he did it.
- "Loeb shoots him in the head" i've never seen this episode, does he do this courteously, to save him pain?
- link Frankfurt if it's the city
- "tells Jones the job" that the job
- "a word given to Jones in the episode "In Which We Meet Mr. Jones"" this seems more important information, maybe add this as a hatnote, or parenthesize it?
That's about it, well written stuff. ChessFiends (talk) 19:44, 3 May 2013 (UTC)
- Thanks for reviewing. I believe I have addressed all of your concerns. Ruby 2010/2013 02:09, 4 May 2013 (UTC)