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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 17:20, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
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- "an iron hulled, American" why not "American iron-hulled..."?
- "The first iron hulled" hyphenate again.
- "Merchant was built in" could say "she was built in" as it's unambiguous from the previous sentence.
- "manufactured in Black Rock, New York and" comma after NY.
- "winter of 1872-1873" en-dash, and avoid using seasons as their timings differ depending on where you are in the world.
- "a.k.a. the "Anchor Line"" also known as
- "1875 while" comma after year.
- "bushels corn" of?
- "Racine, Wisconsin due" comma after Wisconsin.
- Apply en-dashes to year ranges in infobox.
- "1862 in Buffalo, New York, by the shipyard owned by David Bell " overlinked, and you already said that second bit.
- "Black Rock, New York by" comma after NY.
- "J.V.F. Wilson" space out J. V. F.
- "50 psi" convert.
- "14 miles per hour (12.2 kn" can you add kph too?
- "launched ... launching" repetitive.
- "the old measurement system was abolished" already linked above, but to a redirect.
- "Malden, Ontario to prevent" comma after Ontario.
- "winter of 1872 and the spring of 1873" see above, avoid seasons.
- "(a.k.a. the "Anchor Line") " also known as.
- "of Erie, Pennsylvania, which" overlinked.
- "damaging her" which one?
- In April... In June ... In July... mix it up little, perhaps "two months later" instead of "In June"?
- "for Milwaukee, Wisconsin, with" overlinked.
- "bushels corn" of?
- "off Racine, Wisconsin at around" comma after Wisconsin.
- "second mate" link.
- "sank onto the reef in about fifteen minutes" any word on casualties?
- "the summer of 1877" season.
- "badly broken up and" why "badly"?
- See also, those boat names need italics.
- Six instances of spaced hyphens in ref titles which should be en-dashes.
That's all I have. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 18:09, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
- @The Rambling Man: Done, with the exception of the seasons, which I don't see the problem with. GreatLakesShips (talk) 19:30, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
- See MOS:SEASON. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 19:31, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
- @The Rambling Man: I don't know how to add kph to mph and kn. Aside from that, it is done. GreatLakesShips (talk) 10:18, 30 August 2021 (UTC)
- See MOS:SEASON. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 19:31, 29 August 2021 (UTC)