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Featured articleSS Mauna Loa is a featured article; it (or a previous version of it) has been identified as one of the best articles produced by the Wikipedia community. Even so, if you can update or improve it, please do so.
Main Page trophyThis article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page as Today's featured article on February 19, 2021.
Did You Know Article milestones
DateProcessResult
September 26, 2008Good article nomineeListed
October 12, 2008WikiProject peer reviewReviewed
November 5, 2008WikiProject A-class reviewApproved
November 17, 2008Featured article candidatePromoted
Did You Know A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on October 2, 2008.
The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that in August 1936, the Matson Navigation Company cargo ship SS Mauna Loa came to the aid of a windjammer that was crewed by Sea Scouts and had been missing for two weeks?
Current status: Featured article

GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:SS Mauna Loa/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

I am placing this article on hold. First of all, there is a very large number of red links. Also, the prose is lacking references. Alert me on my talk page when you are finished. ṜέđṃάяķvюĨїήīṣŢ Drop me a line 16:36, 25 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I posted questions for you regarding this hold on your talk page. Please feel free to respond in either place. — Bellhalla (talk) 17:48, 25 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

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Thank you for taking the time to review SS Mauna Loa for consideration as a good article. I'm more than happy to work to improve the article, but am stumped as to what prose is lacking citations. Can you clarify that for me please? Also, could you let me know where the guideline that addresses redlinks is in Wikipedia:Good article criteria? Maybe I'm reading it differently than the consensus, but I don't see anything that addresses redlinks. Many thanks in advance. — Bellhalla (talk) 17:42, 25 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

The prose is the lead section. The redlinks are not necessary for GA, the article just looks more professional. I'm sorry, I should have clarified both of these. Cheers, ṜέđṃάяķvюĨїήīṣŢ Drop me a line 17:50, 25 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
The style that I prefer does not clutter the lead with citations (unless there is a particularly compelling reason to do so). This is a style that is sanctioned at WP:LEADCITE and is in use in a great many featured articles.
Also, as an FYI, I moved your original review on to the review page at Talk:SS Mauna Loa/GA1 (the link generated from {{GAN}}). — Bellhalla (talk) 17:58, 25 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
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promoted by Redmarkviolinist (talk · contribs) 15:16, 26 September 2008. Woody (talk) 17:43, 10 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]
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