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This review is transcluded from Talk:SM UB-16/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Well written: Pass
One minor issue though:
"UB-16 and sister boat UB-17 comprised an order of two submarines ordered - a little redundant
How about: "The German Imperial Navy ordered UB-16 and sister boat UB-17 which comprised an order of two submarines ordered…" to make it really redundant? Or I could just change the ordered to placed. :) — Bellhalla (talk) 14:06, 18 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]