Talk:SMS Spalato/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 (talk · contribs) 09:49, 6 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]

This article is in good shape. A few comments:

No dabs or duplicate links
categorisation seems sensible
suggest pointing out that the guns were muzzle-loaders if that was the case
- Done
the guns in the body and infobox don't match, they are 9 cm in the body and 87 mm in the infobox, and 7cm in the body and 66 mm in the infobox
- Fixed
suggest linking knots
- It's linked in the design section
linking ship commissioning
- Done
suggest stating what sort of ship Radetzky was
- Good idea
gunnery or artillery school? the terms seem to be used interchangeably, perhaps better to be consistent?
- Done
when the remaining four 47 mm guns are mentioned, worth stating these were the QF ones, not the bow-mounted one
- Good catch
the image licensing needs work, shouldn't it be PD-because?
- Yup, fixed.

That's me done. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 09:59, 6 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks again. Parsecboy (talk) 12:03, 7 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]

This article is well-written, verifiable using reliable sources, covers the subject well, is neutral and stable, contains no plagiarism, and is illustrated by an appropriately licensed image with an appropriate caption. Passing. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 04:18, 8 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]