Talk:SMS Olga/GA1
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 01:57, 30 December 2017 (UTC)
I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 01:57, 30 December 2017 (UTC)
- No DABs
- Images appropriately licensed.
- old corvette Augusta, Shouldn't there be a comma after corvette? And another after Barbados
- No on the first, but yes on the second
- Can you identify the engine type better? She's late enough to have compound-expansion engines.
- Good point
- I added it to the infobox for you.
- Good point
- Link South America, Samoa, Barbados, Trinidad and Tobago, Venezuela, Brazil, rammed, Spain, battery
- I think the standard is not to link to articles about modern states. I also don't think linking to naval ram in this case is appropriate, since it would imply that the steamship had a ram. Did link South America and battery though.
- Given the oft-mentioned geographic illiteracy of Americans, any such policy strikes me as wishful thinking.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 23:25, 4 January 2018 (UTC)
- I think the standard is not to link to articles about modern states. I also don't think linking to naval ram in this case is appropriate, since it would imply that the steamship had a ram. Did link South America and battery though.
- Do you mean the Orinoco River?
- Good catch
- London Paddington station and London Victoria station Awkward. Tell the reader that they were in London visiting.
- Reworded
- the former aboard the ironclad Hansa and the former aboard Notus. There should be a latter in her somewhere.
- Fixed
- Nicely done.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 17:16, 30 December 2017 (UTC)