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Reviewer: Dank (talk · contribs) 17:04, 25 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Review

  • "an aviso, of the Imperial German Navy": no comma
  • " Her keel was laid in 1888, she was launched in January 1890, and completed in May 1891.": nonparallel; one fix is to replace the first comma by a semicolon
  • "She served in this capacity through World War I and after the German defeat, was sold for scrapping in 1919.": A little better would be: She served in this capacity through World War I. After the German defeat, the ship was sold for scrapping in 1919.
  • "p. 814": de-italicize
  • Otherwise:
GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:
    - Dank (push to talk) 18:56, 25 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
    Can you tell I copied that first line in all of the articles of this series when I created the stubs? Everything should be fixed. Parsecboy (talk) 16:59, 26 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Passed - Dank (push to talk) 19:48, 26 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]