Talk:SMS Meteor (1890)/GA1
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Reviewer: Dank (talk · contribs) 17:04, 25 June 2013 (UTC)
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- "an aviso, of the Imperial German Navy": no comma
- " Her keel was laid in 1888, she was launched in January 1890, and completed in May 1891.": nonparallel; one fix is to replace the first comma by a semicolon
- "She served in this capacity through World War I and after the German defeat, was sold for scrapping in 1919.": A little better would be: She served in this capacity through World War I. After the German defeat, the ship was sold for scrapping in 1919.
- "p. 814": de-italicize
- Otherwise:
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- - Dank (push to talk) 18:56, 25 June 2013 (UTC)
- Can you tell I copied that first line in all of the articles of this series when I created the stubs? Everything should be fixed. Parsecboy (talk) 16:59, 26 June 2013 (UTC)
- - Dank (push to talk) 18:56, 25 June 2013 (UTC)
- Pass/Fail:
Passed - Dank (push to talk) 19:48, 26 June 2013 (UTC)