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Reviewer: Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk · contribs) 01:23, 20 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]


Well constructed, will come back shortly. Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 01:23, 20 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]

  • Section 1; Consistency maintained, all the parameters—Displacement, Length, Beam, Draft, Power, Propulsion, Speed, Armament and armor—seem fine. Conversion templates and link s in right place.
  • Section 2; para 1; The commissioning date is never mentioned. Is it not available?
    • Not that I've seen anywhere - Conway's just gives the completion date, which is probably not the same. It's probably available in Sieche's book but I haven't been able to get my hands on a copy - there aren't many in the US.
  • Section 2; para 1; Is it necessary to mention the 1875 to Don Juan d'Austria, as it is already linked previously.
    • Good catch, that one had been linked, and apparently I didn't remove all of it when I de-linked it.
  • Section 2; para 3; then-Captain Anton Haus; suggest mentioning that Haus was the Commander of the Navy later, in parenthesis.
    • Good idea
  • Lead; it is mentioned that she was armed with ten 47 mm (1.9 in) guns, but in the prose it was four 47 mm (1.9 in) quick-firing guns and six 47 mm revolver cannon, aren't these two different?
    • Yes, but for the purposes of the lead, it's ok to summarize them that way since they are all 47 mm guns.
Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 11:27, 27 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for another review. Parsecboy (talk) 12:57, 28 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:
    Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 13:01, 28 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]