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Reviewer: MisterBee1966 (talk · contribs) 12:55, 21 November 2011 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
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My feedback is based on Hildebrand, Röhr and Steinmetz, volume 5, pages 83–85. MisterBee1966 (talk) 20:15, 24 November 2011 (UTC)
Hildebrand, Hans H.; Röhr, Albert; Steinmetz, Hans-Otto (1993). Die Deutschen Kriegsschiffe. Vol. 1–10. Ratingen: Mundus Verlag. ASIN B003VHSRKE.
- The various German navies had four ships with the name of Karlsruhe, maybe worth noting.
- Name after the capitol of the Grand Duchy of Baden
- Added to the infobox.
- construction began on 21 September 1911
- Added
- christened by Oberbürgermeister (mayor) Karl Siegrist (has a German Wiki page)
- Added
- coal consumption by far exceeded design spec, this led to many engineering changes prior to commissioning
- This should probably go in the class article - Sturm is reviewing that article for GAN. Does it give any specific figures or changes made?
- according to HRS 17 ships of 76,609 GRT were sunk
- 16 ships is the only figure I've seen, across Halpern, Massie, and Bennett. Do they give any specific information?
- her first commander was Fregattenkapitän Fritz Lüdecke
- Added.
- Köhler's widow later christened the light cruiser Karlsruhe of the Reichsmarine (page 89)
- Added. Was she involved in the second Imperial Karlsruhe in any way?
- Bristol was hit twice in the engagement
- Added. Parsecboy (talk) 16:14, 6 December 2011 (UTC)