Talk:SMS Habsburg (1865)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 23:19, 2 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]

One DAB for Pola.
- Fixed, actually a dupe link
Clarify that infobox stats are for as built.
- Added a note
Howzabout feet and inches for metric conversions?
- You'd think I'd remember that at some point.
Clarify that the early guns were smoothbores in the design section, although this would be more appropriately named description.
- Done
Fix your rounding for battery armor in the main body and for the 7-inch guns and the 26 cm gun.
- Should all be fixed
launched no 24 typo and link launched
- Done
Link commissioned on first use and breech-loader.
- Done
What do you mean "converging fire"?
- Dunno exactly what Wilson was talking about - he doesn't really explain what he meant and there isn't a whole lot of context to go on. I assume he meant something along the lines of raking fire, but I figured I ought to use the phrase he did to avoid over-interpreting it.
Wilson revised and expanded his earlier books in the two volume set Battleships in Action originally published in the '20s and republished by the Naval Institute Press/Conways in '95. Might be worthwhile to get a hold of a copy (really all you need is volume 1 as that covers everything up to the Russo-Japanese War) and see if there were any significant changes made to his earlier account.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:00, 5 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]
- Probably worth doing if I ever try to get these articles in shape for ACR/FAC. Thanks for reviewing the article. Parsecboy (talk) 12:25, 6 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]