Talk:SMS Gneisenau/GA1
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Reviewer: MisterBee1966 (talk) 09:56, 18 February 2011 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
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Comments
[edit]- Franz von Hipper was its first commander. I think this is notable.
- Kaiser's Cup; a footnaote could help to understand what that was
- Could you add the crew size to the infobox?
MisterBee1966 (talk) 10:11, 18 February 2011 (UTC)
- All three added. Anything else you think the article needs (or perhaps anything you might have access to)? Parsecboy (talk) 16:38, 18 February 2011 (UTC)
yes, sorry!
- she was christioned by Alfred von Schlieffen see Hildebrand, Röhr and Steinmetz Volume 3 pages 211, 212
- according to Hildebrand, Röhr and Steinmetz Volume 3 pages 211, she was named after cruiser frigate Gneisenau
- sea trials between 26 March and mid July 1908 in the Baltic Sea, Hildebrand, Röhr and Steinmetz Volume 3 pages 212
- officially joined the High Sea Fleet on 12 July, Hildebrand, Röhr and Steinmetz Volume 3 pages 212
- she won the Kaiser Cup twice in 08/09 for armored cruisers and in twice again 10/11 for cruiser squadrons (with Scharnhorst). This is a bit unclear in the article, Hildebrand, Röhr and Steinmetz Volume 3 pages 212
I think that's it MisterBee1966 (talk) 06:19, 19 February 2011 (UTC)
- Alright, thanks for looking that up. I've added it all to the article. Parsecboy (talk) 00:07, 21 February 2011 (UTC)
Nice article! MisterBee1966 (talk) 11:35, 21 February 2011 (UTC)