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GA Review

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Reviewer: Starstriker7 - public(talk) 08:10, 15 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I'll take on this review. --Starstriker7 - public(talk) 08:10, 15 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Criterion 1

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Lead

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Service history

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  • "She arrive too late" - She arrived too late
  • "until the summer of 1889,
  • Deutschland joined" --> until the summer of 1889, when Deutschland joined
  • Can you wikilink "Kaiserliche Marine"?
  • "Following Diederichs's seizure of the Kiautschou Bay concession in November 1897" - Following Diederichs's [[Kiautschou Bay concession|seizure of Kiautschou Bay]] in November 1897
  • "light cruisers Gefion Cormoran" - I'm not sure what happened here.

Criterion 2

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All set here.

Criterion 3

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The article is both broad and comprehensive, so it passes this criterion.

Criterion 4

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The article meets the neutrality criterion.

Criterion 5

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Edit history checks out; the article is stable.

Criterion 6

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Both images check out in terms of copyright data.

Overall comments

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Much like Kaiser, this article is very strong, Parsecboy. All that's here to do are a few nitpicks, and I'll pass this at GA. Till then, this one's going on hold. --Starstriker7 - public(talk) 08:21, 15 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]