Talk:SMS Deutschland (1874)/GA1
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Reviewer: Starstriker7 - public(talk) 08:10, 15 July 2011 (UTC)
I'll take on this review. --Starstriker7 - public(talk) 08:10, 15 July 2011 (UTC)
Criterion 1
[edit]Lead
[edit]- "Kaiser was rebuilt in the early 1890s" - Did you mean Deutschland?
Service history
[edit]- "She arrive too late" - She arrived too late
- "until the summer of 1889,
- Deutschland joined" --> until the summer of 1889, when Deutschland joined
- Can you wikilink "Kaiserliche Marine"?
- "Following Diederichs's seizure of the Kiautschou Bay concession in November 1897" - Following Diederichs's [[Kiautschou Bay concession|seizure of Kiautschou Bay]] in November 1897
- "light cruisers Gefion Cormoran" - I'm not sure what happened here.
- Too many times rewording a sentence is what happened there. Should all be sorted out now. Parsecboy (talk) 11:09, 15 July 2011 (UTC)
Criterion 2
[edit]All set here.
Criterion 3
[edit]The article is both broad and comprehensive, so it passes this criterion.
Criterion 4
[edit]The article meets the neutrality criterion.
Criterion 5
[edit]Edit history checks out; the article is stable.
Criterion 6
[edit]Both images check out in terms of copyright data.
Overall comments
[edit]Much like Kaiser, this article is very strong, Parsecboy. All that's here to do are a few nitpicks, and I'll pass this at GA. Till then, this one's going on hold. --Starstriker7 - public(talk) 08:21, 15 July 2011 (UTC)
- Thanks again for reviewing the article. Parsecboy (talk) 11:09, 15 July 2011 (UTC)
- No problem. I'm going to pass this article right now. --Starstriker7 - public(talk) 16:33, 15 July 2011 (UTC)
- Thanks again for reviewing the article. Parsecboy (talk) 11:09, 15 July 2011 (UTC)