Talk:SMS Cyclop (1860)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Adityavagarwal (talk · contribs) 16:38, 26 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Well written. Would be picking up the review, and amending straight forward changed. Feel free to revert/change any mistakes that I make while I edit the article.

Is it well written?
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B. It complies with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation:
Is it verifiable with no original research?
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D. It contains no copyright violations nor plagiarism:
Absolutely not. 0% by Earwig.
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Is it neutral?
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Yep.
Is it stable?
It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute:
Entirely written by Parsecboy.
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Overall:
Pass or Fail:

Don't you think "laid up" should be linked to reserve fleet?
- I like the wiktionary link more because all that's really needed there is a dictionary definition of what that means, and a reader has to dig a bit more to find that on the reserve fleet page.
Link Prussia.
- Done
"assigned to the artillery" artillery could be linked. Adityavagarwal (talk) 16:55, 26 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]
- I'm not sure that's all that useful a link in that context. If we had an article about artillery training, that would be a good link, but as far as I know we don't (the closest are country-specific articles like Royal School of Artillery).

This is it from me. Again, a very well written article! Adityavagarwal (talk) 12:51, 27 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for another review! Parsecboy (talk) 23:57, 27 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

You are welcome. Surely, you write superb articles!

Adityavagarwal (talk) 01:38, 28 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]