Talk:SMS Alexandrine/GA1
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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 14:44, 17 November 2017 (UTC)
I'll take this one. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 14:44, 17 November 2017 (UTC)
- In light of full complaince, I will instant pass and make some prose suggestions. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 16:21, 17 November 2017 (UTC)
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- No DAB links , "Central Pacific" is DAB link.
- No Dead links
- Images appropriately licensed
Prose Suggestions
[edit]- "Intended for service in the German colonial empire, the ship was designed with a combination of steam and sail power for extended range, and was equipped with a battery of ten 15-centimeter (5.9 in) guns." Would "Intended to serve with" work better as an into?
- That's my only suggestion; good job! -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 16:28, 17 November 2017 (UTC)