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Reviewer: Royroydeb (talk · contribs) 11:39, 16 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Jellyman, ping me after you have added a style of play section to this article. RRD13 দেবজ্যোতি (talk) 09:26, 23 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]

  • to play for Brechin City Boys Club (later Brechin City Youths) - you mean it was later renamed as?
  • United manager Peter Houston praised Gauld after a goalless draw against Ross County in September 2012. - the sudden appearance of this fact is strange. I mean why did he say so? What did he actually say - the quote
  • " it was reported" - by whom?
  • what was its fate? of the scouting?
  • with Gauld playing a big part in the first two goals - how he took a big part?
  • "he was shortlisted for the PFA Scotland Young Player of the Year award." - its followup?
  • In the Dundee United section, the seasons are not clearly specified. I mean there should be sentences like "He started the 2012-13 season with" .. etc
  • "put into the club's reserve team" - I think you should write B team as people generally refer the youth team as the reserve team (English league system)
  • The ref 6 does not mention it is his debut
  • The ref 9 does not mention it is his first start
  • The last sentence of the Sporting Cp first paragraph should be put earlier.
  • Any information about the 15-16 season?
  • "but did not play" - source?
  • compared to Lionel Messi - since it is a comparison, you should mention who had done it.

The Almightey Drill Jellyman RRD13 দেবজ্যোতি (talk) 09:29, 14 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]