Talk:Russian monitor Uragan

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Review: March 28, 2017. (Reviewed version).

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GA Review

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 03:03, 28 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]

GA Criteria
1 1.a Y 1.b Y 2 2.a Y 2.b Y 2.c Y 2.d Y 3 3.a Y 3.b Y 4 4.a Y 5 5.a Y 6 6.a Y 6.b Y

Images are properly licensed Y
No DAB links Y
No Copyvio Y
No dead links Y

Prose suggestions

"During Uragan's sea trials on 31 May 1865, she reached a maximum speed of 6.5 knots (12.0 km/h; 7.5 mph), one of the faster ships in her class." Perhaps "During Uragan's sea trials on 31 May 1865, she reached a maximum speed of 6.5 knots (12.0 km/h; 7.5 mph), making her one of the faster ships in her class."
- Good idea.
" but Uragan was modified for the addition of 0.5-inch (12.7 mm) armor plates after completion. It is, however, unknown if they were ever fitted, although they were manufactured and then placed in storage." Somewhat confusing perhaps: "but Uragan was modified, so as to be ready for the addition of 0.5-inch (12.7 mm) armor plates after completion. It is, however, unknown if they were ever fitted, although they were manufactured and then placed in storage."
- I used slightly different wording, but your idea is sound.
That is all. -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 03:13, 28 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]
- Thanks for looking this over.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 14:21, 28 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  All is good, passing now. -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 21:37, 28 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]