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Reviewer: Dank (talk · contribs) 00:31, 28 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Review

  • The toolbox checks out.
  • "an 32-gun": a 32-gun
  • "; four on the upper deck as chase guns and 28 on the lower deck.": sentence fragment; change the semicolon to a comma
  • "two gun": two guns
  • "her armament was changed again and now consisted of fourteen": "... changed again, to fourteen".
    • I didn't like the comma after again and went with: "In 1877, her armament was changed again to 14 eight-inch guns".
  • "that reduced": "reduced" isn't impossible in this sense, but it's a little uncomfortable. How about "that narrowed"?
  • "All dates used in this article are Old Style": period needed.
  • "Robert Gardiner": "Gardiner, Robert"
  • Otherwise:
GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:
    - Dank (push to talk) 00:47, 28 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

All done, thanks for the review.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 17:43, 29 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Passed. - Dank (push to talk) 20:47, 29 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]