Talk:Russian ironclad Sevastopol/GA1
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Reviewer: Dank (talk · contribs) 00:31, 28 June 2013 (UTC)
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- The toolbox checks out.
- "an 32-gun": a 32-gun
- "; four on the upper deck as chase guns and 28 on the lower deck.": sentence fragment; change the semicolon to a comma
- "two gun": two guns
- "her armament was changed again and now consisted of fourteen": "... changed again, to fourteen".
- I didn't like the comma after again and went with: "In 1877, her armament was changed again to 14 eight-inch guns".
- "that reduced": "reduced" isn't impossible in this sense, but it's a little uncomfortable. How about "that narrowed"?
- "All dates used in this article are Old Style": period needed.
- "Robert Gardiner": "Gardiner, Robert"
- Otherwise:
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- - Dank (push to talk) 00:47, 28 June 2013 (UTC)
- Pass/Fail:
All done, thanks for the review.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 17:43, 29 June 2013 (UTC)
Passed. - Dank (push to talk) 20:47, 29 June 2013 (UTC)